Presentation of Design Solution. Week 2 Discussion. Final Post

1. Provide your latest version of your Project Theme.

Weaving the classic nostalgic elements of MNii’s legendary history with the cool, fresh, current vibe of today’s surf culture.

2. Clearly list all the revisions have you made since the Wednesday night pre-submittal?

I added all of the visual elements to the storyboard. I changed the order of some of the boxes to make it flow better. And I edited some of the text.

3. How do you think the revisions improved the storyboard?

I think the revisions made it much easier for anyone to see what I am going to put into my video.

4. Does your storyboard satisfy the criteria listed by the committee?

I think my storyboard satisfies the criteria listed by the committee

5. Are there any specific suggestions or assistance that you would like from your classmates moving forward?

I would like my classmates to continue to give me their honest opinions and suggestions.

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Presentation of Design Solution. Week 2 Discussion. Initial Post

1. Provide your latest version of your Project Theme.

Weaving the classic nostalgic elements of MNii’s legendary history with the cool, fresh, current vibe of today’s surf culture.

2. Clearly list all the revisions have you made since the Wednesday night pre-submittal?

I added all of the visual elements to the storyboard. I changed the order of some of the boxes to make it flow better. And I edited some of the text.

3. How do you think the revisions improved the storyboard?

I think the revisions made it much easier for anyone to see what I am going to put into my video.

4. Does your storyboard satisfy the criteria listed by the committee?

I think my storyboard satisfies the criteria listed by the committee

5. Are there any specific suggestions or assistance that you would like from your classmates moving forward?

I would like my classmates to continue to give me their honest opinions and suggestions.

Presentation of Design Solution. Week 1 : Discussion Board Final Post

1.Provide the latest version of your Project Theme.

Weaving the classic nostalgic elements of MNii’s legendary history with the cool, fresh, current vibe of today’s surf culture.

2. Submit your revised script incorporating the comments and suggestions you received.

Introduction (approx. 15 seconds):

Hi I’m Marcia Coles with a brand vision for MNii Surf Apparel. MNii’s history grabbed me right from the takeoff.

Campaign Development (approx. 3 minutes):

The story began in the 1950’s when Minoru Nii, a local tailor right off the beach in Makaha, Hawaii designed and built the bulletproof Makaha Drowners to withstand surfing the powerful waves.

In 2012 the original M.Nii brand was revived. The tailor’s exact patterns and methods of construction are now used in a full line of classic laid back casual clothing.

While the company’s concept and products have been well received, the iconic brand needs a vision for the future. A focused rebranding will build brand awareness, elevate its image and exposure, and reposition M.Nii to be more competitive.

Over the last decade the number people in America who surf has tripled. Driven by trends toward healthier, more active lifestyles, with older demographics and women increasingly joining the lineup and with the sport swelling internationally, the surf industry will generate more than 13 billion $ by 2017. And you don’t have to surf to love the lifestyle.

The new MNii brand focuses on an affluent 25 to 45 year old demographic. They are healthy, fit, educated and responsible. They love the environment and want to take care of it. Most importantly, they love having fun.

MNii’s current logo is the tag that the tailor sewed into his Makaha Drowners. It is very cool, and has recognition value, so it shouldn’t be forgotten. It also has a lot of unnecessary detail that is hard to duplicate.

The new logo conveys the brand’s identity clearly, with elements from the old logo, and nothing extra. An old school long board, with “stringers” down the center referencing the stripes in surf clothing. Hibiscus flowers dotting the I’s drawn in the classic Hawaiian style.

The logo and headline font has a sophisticated retro look that echoes the vintage logo, but is simple, fresh and clean. The subhead font is playful and free spirited. The text font is clear, modern and easy to read.

The new brand utilizes a rich full color palette to create good vibes.

Images include vintage Hawaiian photos and relics, shots of surfers riding big curling waves, and folks relaxing and playing in exotic beach locations.

The design reflects the dualities in the campaign theme: old and new, charged and relaxed. The subjects in the photos are active, people having fun. The treatment adds a cool, laid back, vintage feel.

The motion and sounds also convey the brands contrasting characteristics. Classic surf music has a fun upbeat and mellow sound. Motion is set in time to the music.

MNii’s Website and mobile app are the hub of the brand’s identity. They’re fun, interactive, constantly changing.

Interactive Social media platforms thrive on causes that give folks a chance to give back. The brand vision encourages interaction with a connection to the Surfrider Foundation, dedicated to the protection and enjoyment of oceans, waves and beaches.

Conclusion Summary (approx. 15 sec):

This brand vision builds an MNii tribe. Weaving the classic nostalgic elements of MNii’s legendary history with the cool, fresh, current vibe of today’s surf culture.

A cohesively integrated identity with exposure spread across multiple media platforms builds strong web and social media presence and promotes online shopping. Print ads and outdoor advertising formats bring it all together. Telling the story, and spreading aloha. Mahalo for watching.

3. List all the revisions you have made since the Wednesday night pre-submittal?

I went through the script and rearranged some of the points so that they flow better. I incorporated Janelle’s suggestion of breaking up the paragraphs a little to put it into more of a script form that suggests images. I also used the site she suggested to help with the timing of the script: http://www.edgestudio.com/production/words-to-time-calculator  I found that I needed to edit out a lot of text to make it fit into the timeline of about 3.5 minutes. I ended up cutting out over 300 words! I also took advantage of Chaz’s suggestion and watched some cool surfing videos on Vimeo. I downloaded one that I will use in my video.

4. How do you think the revisions improved the submission?

I think I edited out a lot of extraneous words and made the whole script more concise. I also gave a lot of thought to what images I will use.

5. Are there any specific comments you would like from your classmates moving forward?

I really appreciate all of the unique viewpoints of my talented classmates. I feel really lucky to be in this program with them. And I welcome all of their creative input.

Presentation of Design Solution. Week 1 : Discussion Board Initial Post

1. Provide your campaign Theme and Directive Words.

The theme of my campaign weaves the classic nostalgic elements of the brand’s legendary historic beginnings with the cool, clean, current vibe in the culture of today’s target audience.

Directive words are Fresh, Classic, and Fun

2. Submit your script.

Introduction (approx. 5–15 seconds):

Hi I’m Marcia Coles presenting a new brand vision for MNii, an atypically fashion forward Surf Apparel brand that is not made for the usual 12 to 20 year old surf crowd. I chose MNii because it has an interesting history that grabbed me right from the takeoff.

Campaign Development (approx. 2–3 minutes):

The story of M.Nii began in the 1950’s when Minoru Nii, a local tailor right off the beach in Makaha, Hawaii designed and built the very first pair of boardshorts: the bulletproof Makaha Drowners to withstand surfing the powerful waves. In 2012 the original M.Nii brand was revived. The exact patterns and excellent methods of construction used by the tailor, are used now in a line of clothing that includes the trunks, as well as a full line of classic laid back casual clothing.

While the company’s name, concept and products have been well received; the iconic brand needs a vision for the future. The current brand is aimed at a very narrow target audience. A focused rebranding of the brand will build brand awareness, elevate its image and exposure, and position M.Nii to be more competitive in commanding its share of the surf apparel market sector.

Over the last decade the number people in America who surf has increased to over 3 million. Driven by trends toward healthier, more active lifestyles, with older demographics and women increasingly joining the lineup and with the sport swelling internationally, analysts predict that by 2017 the global surf industry will generate more than $13 billion. And you don’t have to surf to love the lifestyle.

The new MNii brand is focused on a target audience that is affluent 25 to 45 year old men and women. They are healthy, fit, educated and responsible. Most importantly, they love having fun. They also love the environment, want to take care of it and to give back. The new MNii brand vision includes a strong tie to the Surfrider Foundation, dedicated to the protection and enjoyment of oceans, waves and beaches through a powerful activist network.

MNii uses the tag that Minori Nii the tailor sewed into his Makaha Drowners as a logo. It is very cool, and has recognition value, so it shouldn’t be forgotten. It also has a lot of unnecessary detail in the graphic that is hard to duplicate. The new logo conveys the brand’s identity clearly, with elements from the old logo, and nothing extra. The font has a fresh retro feel to it, but is simple, modern and clean. An old school long board, with “stringers” down the center that echo the stripes in surf clothing style. The stylized hibiscus flowers dotting the “I”s are drawn in the classic Hawaiian style.

Marc Chagall said, “Color is vibration like music”. The new brand utilizes a rich full color palette to create good vibes. The intensity of the colors is slightly muted to give the soft effect of vintage Hawaiian postcards.

The font used in the new logo and as a headline font has a retro look that gives a nod to the vintage logo, but has a sophisticated feel. The subhead font is playful and free spirited. The text font is clear, modern and easy to read.

The images include vintage Hawaiian photos, posters and relics, and new photos of surfers riding big curling waves, as well as beautiful images of folks relaxing and playing in exotic beach locations.

The design reflects the dualities in the theme of the campaign: old and new, charged and relaxed. The subjects in the photos are active, hip looking people having fun, but the treatment of the images give the pieces a cool, laid back, vintage feel.

The motion and sounds also convey the brands contrasting characteristics. Classic surf rock and roll music has a fun upbeat sound that is kind of mellow. Motion is set in time to the music.

MNii’s Website is the hub of the brand’s identity. It is fun, interactive, constantly growing and changing. A mobile app tracks events, and locations. Interactive Social media platforms thrive on causes that give folks a chance to give back. An earth and social conscious MNii tribe loves to get involved. The new MNii brand encourages interaction and builds the tribe with participation in fun local events like beach cleanups, and surf camps for disadvantaged kids. An annual Hawaiian Vacation Sweepstakes also creates a buzz.

Conclusion Summary (approx.10–30 sec):

This brand vision builds an MNii tribe and address the contrasting characteristics that are the heart and soul of MNii. Weaving the classic nostalgic elements of the brand’s legendary historic beginnings with the cool, clean, current vibe in the culture of today’s target audience.

A cohesively integrated identity with exposure spread across multiple media platforms build strong web and social media presence and promote online shopping. Print ads and outdoor advertising formats bring it all together.

The M.Nii brand represents an important part of our cultural history. It has a story to tell, and aloha to spread.

3. Provide any additional information that you think is necessary for us to understand your submission.

I think all will be made clear with the visuals that will be in the video. Thank you for reviewing my work, I welcome all of your ideas, thoughts and criticisms.

Coles 10 3 1 final

1 - Provide the Project summary.

Key goals:

  • Create a community or tribe around the brand
  • Build brand awareness
  • Increase the brand’s bottom line

Strategies:

  • Build on the brand’s established subcultural credibility.
  • Clean up and sharpen the brand’s image for today’s target audience.
  • Create a strong web and social media presence.
  • Maintain local subcultural credibility.
  • Involvement in fun local surfing and beach cleanup events and festivals.

Key Tenets:

  • M. Nii is the only surf apparel brand that is legendary.
  • Design is pure and simple and made for true surfers.

M.Nii is focused on recreating the same quality as was had back in the 50’s

Tagline:

  • You want some new clothes bro.
  • Surf. Chill. Repeat
  • Classic Aloha Style.

Target audience:

  • 25-45 years old
  • Traits: Easygoing, open minded, creative, generous, productive, professional, healthy
  • Values: Peace, integrity, family, spirituality, equality, life
  • Interests: Travel, history, water, entertainment, surfing, having fun

Differentiation:

M. Nii is legendary, pure and simple and made for true surfers.

2 - What revisions have you have made? Be specific.

I went through the whole book page by page and checked all of the alignments and made some adjustments. I changed the spacing between the letters in the word Differentiation on page 9. I changed some spacing and increased the font size on the quote on page 11. I changed the top of the graphic box on page 15. I changed the spacing and font size on the quote on page 17. I edited some copy and moved the graphics around a little on page 27. I made the picture and the quotes bigger on page 41, 45 and 46. I edited the text and added a flower on page 49.

3 - Why do you think the revisions improved the pages?

They made everything look better, read more precisely, and convey the brand more clearly.

4 - Why is this Final design more successful in presenting the media process, and the goalsoutlined for your campaign?

It is cleaner, and clearer.

5 - Make any additional comments and/or cite any references that may be relevant.

I welcome and appreciate any commentary.

Coles 10 3 1 pre submittal

1 - Provide a Summary of your Project determinations, or a brief

Key goals:Create a community or tribe around the brand

  • Build brand awareness
  • Increase the brand’s bottom line

Strategies:

  • Build on the brand’s established subcultural credibility.
  • Clean up and sharpen the brand’s image for today’s target audience.
  • Create a strong web and social media presence.
  • Maintain local subcultural credibility.
  • Involvement in fun local surfing and beach cleanup events and festivals.

Key Tenets:

  • M. Nii is the only surf apparel brand that is legendary.
  • Design is pure and simple and made for true surfers.

M.Nii is focused on recreating the same quality as was had back in the 50’s staying true to the details.

Tagline:

  • You want some new clothes bro.
  • Surf. Chill. Repeat
  • Classic Aloha Style.

Target audience:

  • 25-45 year old
  • Traits: Easygoing, open minded, creative, generous, productive, professional, healthy
  • Values: Peace, integrity, family, spirituality, equality, life
  • Interests: Travel, history, water, entertainment, surfing, having fun

Differentiation:

M. Nii is the only surf apparel brand that is legendary, pure and simple and made for true surfers.

2 - What references did you use for developing this portion of the Project Book?

I studied several of the project books to see how they were organized and what they included.

3 - How does this new content convey the “unique brand essence” goals and criteria of your campaign?

The new content is consistent with the “unique brand essence” goals and criteria of my campaign.

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4 - Summarize how you followed the guidelines and specifications you established in your Style Guide.

I consistently used the elements that are outlined in my style guide throughout the book. The same colors, textures, font choices and images are seen on every page. I used the same margins, columns, and gutters. The same typographic hierarchy and color palette was also used in follow-through for the assets, as well as my book styling.

5 - How do you think the remaining pages of your design will be successful in communicating with viewers of your presentation?

The graphic design choices presented in my project book address the contrasting characteristics that are heart and soul of the brand. Weaving the classic nostalgic elements of the brand’s legendary historic beginnings with the cool, clean, current vibe in the culture of today’s target audience. As well as the clothing line’s bulletproof construction, which is able to hold up while surfing in thunderous waves, and it’s very laid back casual and comfort for relaxing in after the surf session.

6 - Is there anything else you want to say to explain your choices or justify your designs?

My choices in my design make me happy. 

Coles 10 2 1 final

1 - Provide the Project summary.

Key goals:

  • Create a community or tribe around the brand
  • Build brand awareness
  • Increase the brand’s bottom line

Strategies:

  • Build on the brand’s established subcultural credibility.
  • clean up and sharpen the brand’s image for today’s target audience.
  • Create a strong web and social media presence.
  • Maintain local subcultural credibility.
  • Involvement in fun local surfing events like local beach cleanup events and festivals.

Key Tenets:

  • M. Nii is the only surf apparel brand that is legendary.
  • Design is pure and simple and made for true surfers.

M.Nii is focused on recreating the same quality as was had back in the 50’s staying true to the details.

Tagline:

  • You want some new clothes bro.
  • Surf. Chill. Repeat
  • Classic Aloha Style.

Target audience:

  • 25-45 years old
  • Traits: Easygoing, open minded, creative, generous, productive, professional, healthy
  • Values: Peace, integrity, family, spirituality, equality, life
  • Interests: Travel, history, water, entertainment, surfing, having fun

Differentiation:

M. Nii is the only surf apparel brand that is legendary, pure and simple and made for true surfers.

2 - What revisions have you have made? Be specific.

  • Front Cover – I changed the layout so that The Journey is at the top, and the logo is on the cover at the bottom (as was recommended by my peer Jennifer) rather than on the photo. I also added embossing to the lettering, to go with the leather book cover look.
  • TOC – I added the tiki, and updated the numbering.
  • Page 7 – I added the hula doll.
  • Pages 8-11 The pages were too heavy and needed some negative space, so I removed the sand texture background.
  • Pages 10-11 – I added the embossing to the graphics and made the colors a little brighter in the SWOT graphic to give it more weight.
  • Page 12 – I moved the text block to the center for balance.
  • Pages 16-23 – I changed the Research Paper text layout so that it would flow better.
  • Page 26 – I added Logo Development content.
  • Page 28 – I updated the Mood Boards, changing the 3rd one to be my final one.
  • Page 31 – I added some images.
  • Page 32 – I added the Logo Use content.
  • Page 34 – I added the Images and Textures content
  • Page 36 – I added the Color & Typography content.
  • Back Cover – I added some embossing and enlarged the logo.

3 - Why do you think the revisions improved the pages?

I think the revisions improved the pages because they look better now. The style is evolving into a deeper and more cohesive theme for the project.

4 - Why is this Final design more successful in presenting the media process, and the goals outlined for your campaign?

As I go forward with the project, I am constantly reorganizing and checking my project against the theme and the goals of the campaign.

5 - Are there any specific comments you would like from your Peers moving forward?

I have developed such a high regard and respect for my peers in this program. I am so grateful for all of the comments that I have gotten from them. They have been immensely helpful! I would like to welcome them to continue looking at my work from their unique and talented perspectives, with fresh eyes, and keep the comments coming.

6 - Make any additional comments and/or cite any references that may be relevant.

My favorite reference is Goggle Images. 

Coles 10 2 1 pre-submittal

Coles 10 1 1 final

1 - Provide the Project summary

My project creates a new brand identity for a surf apparel brand that has an interesting history and a unique story. The company is currently using a brand that I feel is not the best identity for this brand. The current brand has a very hipster feel. My goal is to create a new brand that has a fun, fresh, clean, and exciting look and feel. My goal is to appeal to an older, more sophisticated group than the other surf apparel brands appeal to.

2 - List the revisions you have made.

I wanted to make the book look like a travel journal. So, I added divider pages with tabs that look like what I imagine I would create for a travel journal. I think the revisions are successful. Jennifer made some suggestions that I incorporated into the design: I changed the leather on the cover to a lighter color. I also changed the drop shadow to and inner shadow. And I changed the opening image to a beautiful beach scene.

3 - Why do you think the revisions improved the designs?

I really think all of these changes are a great improvement because they help to convey the look and feel that I am going for of fun, fresh, clean, and exciting.

4 - Make any additional comments and/or cite any references that may be relevant.

I plan to change up the inner pages. They will have a different look that these “tab” pages.

Project book

1. Provide a Summary of your Project determinations or a brief.

My project creates a new brand identity for a surf apparel brand that has an interesting history and a unique story. The company is currently using a brand that I feel is not the best identity for this brand. The current brand has a very hipster feel. My goal is to create a new brand that has a fun, fresh, clean, and exciting look and feel. My goal is to appeal to an older, more sophisticated group than the other surf apparel brands appeal to.

2. What references did you use for researching your design concept?

I looked at the examples of the past project books, and a lot of Google images. As I was lying awake last night, unable to sleep, it occurred to me that I want to make the book have the feel of a travel journal.

3. How does the design convey the “unique brand essence” of your campaign?

My brand campaign is very exotic, playful and colorful.

4. What elements did you use from your Moodboard, Toolbox or any previous campaign work to develop these designs?

I will use all of the assets from my moodboard, toolbox and previous campaign work in the book. This will include the textures of bamboo, sky, water and sand, the photographic images of people at the beach, the old Hawaii post cards and posters and the images I created of the target audience and the other research graphs.

5. Why do you think this design will be successful in communicating with viewers of your presentation?

I think the design is fun. It makes me happy.

6. Is there anything else you want to say to explain your choices or justify your designs?

I have a lot more work to do!

8.4.1 Week Four Discussion Reflections

Reflect on what you¹ve learned from reading the material and watching the videos. Elaborate on the three most important concepts or ideas that you can take forward in your future work.

1. Social Media is an incredibly powerful tool for getting your word or your brand out there in the world. After looking at the story of Caine’s Arcade and how the world responded, I realized that you need a compelling story. Social media has a social conscience. People are moved by a good story. Going forward I plan to make MNii’s brand be positive and inspirational. I want people to feel good about being part of the MNii tribe.

2. I enjoyed thinking about designing for interaction. That is really exciting. Good communication is not just one-way. It’s an open conversation. Good interaction design invites a response, and makes it easy for folks to respond and play. “’A website is a living, breathing brand tool that needs to be cared for over time’ Gavin Cooper Design Educator and Founder, www.work-in-process.org” (Wheeler 2013).

Going forward, I will continue to examine ways that I can make the brand, especially the website, more interactive.

3. A good branding campaign has to have a diverse and balanced media mix. “Marketers communicate advertising messages through a variety of media channels. Media mixes reflect how companies allocate their spending across different types of media.” (Levens 205). The mix has to be deliberately planned with a well thought out stategy. “Strategy is about being different from your competitors: either performing different activities, or else performing similar activities differently. The purpose of strategy is to determine what not to do so that you prioritize ideas and can focus on setting your product apart” (Saffer 49). Going forward I plan to differentiate MNii from the competitive brands by establishing it as the brand with heart that is interactive.

References:

Levens, Michael. Marketing, 1/e Vitalsource eBook for Full Sail University. Pearson Learning Solutions. VitalBook file.

Saffer, Dan. Designing for Interaction: Creating Innovative Applications and Devices, 2/e Vitalsource eBook for Full Sail University. Pearson Learning Solutions. VitalBook file.

Wheeler, Alina. Designing Brand Identity: An Essential Guide for the Whole Branding Team, 4th Edition. John Wiley & Sons P&T, 10/22/12.